My concern (and it may be unfounded here) is that from what you have above it sounds like you're trying to do too many things at once with this essay. You say it's a guide to writing femslash porn, but it also sounds like you're trying to also do sex-education and start a philosophical discussion about porn and raise awareness of social issues. So instead of trying to do all these things, figure out what you really want readers to take from that and then try to convey that message really well.
If it's going to be a porn-writing guide, then it should include what's most useful to writing porn and leave the what isn't relevant for another discussion where you can do the topic justice or link to outside resources that people can go for more information.
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Date: 2011-08-12 12:21 am (UTC)If it's going to be a porn-writing guide, then it should include what's most useful to writing porn and leave the what isn't relevant for another discussion where you can do the topic justice or link to outside resources that people can go for more information.